Nice one, Katie. This one's better than before, very well done...
5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

wow...that was amazing..so very very true..alot of emotions and it was really beautiful..5/5

perfect, a sweet and perfect love poem....I'm so happy that you finally found some one to love, you deserve it!!! It got me to think about my boyfrined, I love him so much!!!

*Love Sabrina*

Beautiful poem.....really emotional, this person is lucky to have you. stay strong
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That's a real nice poem. I hope you find someone, if you dont already have someone. 5/5

Hey this was very well written and thanks for the comment :)

Amazing poem full of emotion! Very beautifully written! Take Care~! Brooke

i actually appreciate the way you managed to connect "love" and "lust" in this love poem. most people forget that, although the two have nothing to do with each other, they often go together. well written, great job.

Nice stuff,I really think this was sum schizzle of the day material,I think it was great in the way it was expressed.Peace Out.Respect.