by AllHailTheHeartbreaker Apr 24, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Everything |
by Robert
This had alot more images in it and you did very well creating it but I got lost towards the first part of the poem but then got back on track great work with creating the images in the readers mind a bit more practice and you should be there keep it up... |
wwo so much emotion and thought was put into it, i love how you called it Walking through a one-way door. i thoguhti was amazing, keep it up:) |
Every day can open up a new door and nice poem maybe you can read one of mine some time |