Wow...sort of gives a scary suspenseful feeling, but I <3 it. 5/5 |
Nice poem and maybe you should open up to people it might help and maybe you can read one of my poems |
This is an amazing oem hun! I can relate to this because I too sit in my closet to cry and relase my feelings! Keep up the great work! |
by **Just Her**
i really did like this poem... it was very creative, like nothing I've ever read before. I usually dont like non rhyming poems, but I'll make an exception. |
Aww that is such a sad poem! i can totally relate! Feel better! 50 ♥ |
by Brookeღ
Very unique and creative! It was very sad though! Liked the way you added not voices thoughts at the end lol! Very well done! Take Care! Brooke~ |
by lisa marie
If you want to critize, look at all of my old poems. |