aww, beautifully sad =( Love the ending 5/5 |
awww...that was a really good poem...i like your style...you should check out some of my poems if you feel like it |
by Amanda Bee
This was so sad and sweet. I loved it. And thanks for the comments on my poems:) By the way I added you to my favorites b/c your poetry is so good! Keep em'coming:) |
by Amanda Bee
I just read this again because I love this poem. Where are you Jesse??? I miss reading your work. |
that was wonderful. you got me crying... sort of what i'm feeling |
by SaphireAngel
Aww, i luv it. great work! |
by Justin
Wow that was really good, it had real emotion in it and it seemed like it came from your heart, I loved the words you chose and I think you did a great job, 5/5 |