Let me...

by Roni   Apr 24, 2005


When I close my eyes tonight
Let me leave this place of fright
Let me watch my over my
Sister dear
Let me be her guiding light
Let me take her away
From here
Let me hold her in my arms
To let her know that I am here
And that I wont let him
Hurt her any more
let me hug her
to give her comfort
let me whisper in her ear
that i love her
even though I'm not there
let me kiss her once last time
so she knows shes in my heart.
let me help her
to let me go.
Let me give her
one last rose
to tell her
that I know,
that she will always love me
for now
I'm just a helping hand.

~ok. this is some thing else i just thought of. I'm still adding and editing Alot to this. but for now, just tell me what you think of it ~

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  • 19 years ago

    by Bex

    yer its dead good and very strong might need a bit more adding here n there like u said but than again i cant talk coz theres a few of mine that i havent got round to yet bur well done**5**

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    great job, real sad though, but ya it's good!

    ~PLP~ lil slam~ hugs & love~

  • 19 years ago

    by Caitlin

    great poem...5/5