Wow for a short poem that was amazing I loved the last stanza! Very well done! 5/5 Take Care! Brooke~

This one had some errors but i'll tell u one of them, u should use punctuation and let ppl write their poems how they want to and let them use abbreviations..

This one had some errors but i'll tell u one of them, u should use punctuation and let ppl write their poems how they want to and let them use abbreviations..