I liked how you used broken glass and a broken heart, a beautiful way of describing the pain, keep it up xxx

i love it...great write. i could just picture myself with shattered glass around me, just feeling lonely and hurt. very good poem!!

love always...

Good job that touched my heart.Thanks for your comments on mine.I appreciate.Jeff

Ariana here again. I decided to read some of your old poems and I came across this one and it's heartbreaking. But that's good cuz you make heartache seem better because there are other people that have it and it makes you realize that other people can have this pain just like U. GR8 job. Catch U l8er! PEACE