Great poem. It is exactly the way I feel about Angela, I just hope she comes back to me. |
by Amit
Very well expressed. Nice write, Excellent!!!~ |
by Tinkerbelle
This is a great poem.Keep writing.your still on my favs. |
by Ann Stareyes
Beautiful Amanda, Some memories will live forever when someone special touches your heart. I've been married 27 yrs. but theres still memories I have of someone that touched my heart all those yrs. ago. And they're not that easy to erase, that's for sure. hugs, love, *Ann* |
by Lithium
thats a great poem is sad and written differnt i liek it great job xox sam |
by andrea
very nice story...maybe u should try and get in touch with him? who knows maybe u will pick up were u left off |
by M J U
I truly appreciate when I can relate to a piece of work, such as this. I really enjoyed this Amanda and will find time to read more of your effort. Thank you for finding time for mine as well. |
by Harry Bryant
nice job Amanda, young love is always so alive, and sometimes scary as well, I think we all remember our first love, and even harken back to those days in our mind, now and then, wondering WHAT IF, I thouroughly enjoyed this poem, keep up the good work, and btw thanks for your comments on my poems. your friend in poetry Harry |
by Dorotea©
Usually I get bored while reading love poems, but this one really intrigued me and caught me, so I read it all and I was very impressed! Wonderful job, you're in my favorites now. I enjoy your style in writing. |
Awsome poem! |
by DooDee
ONE AFTER ANOTHER ! U PROVE WAT AN AMAZING WRITER U ARE ! |