Mirror
by Leah20 Apr 25, 2005
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There's a familiar face staring back at me. It seems like I’ve seen her before, but I can't remember where. Pensive, but I come up with nothing. I can trace all the lines back to the time when they were formed, yet I can not recall who she is. This haunting feeling that I've been here before overcomes me. Immersed eyes, lanky frame, I don't know her, yet she's so familiar. Where have I seen her? She looks scared, lost, out of touch. I wish I could help her. If only I could remember her name. |
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19 years ago
by Anne Conner
That was very original. I thought it was good. If you work on the flow it will be excellent.
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19 years ago
by Matthew
That was pretty good. it was kinda intense, but in a good way. you also have a good use of language(Pensive,Immersed). Keep it up.
P.S. check my stuff out if you want. -
19 years ago
by Ria
It seems quite strange, but still it has a aura of mystery in the scene it describes...I liked it a lot,it's style is somewhat majestic
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19 years ago
by Robert
This would be a great hook for the begining of a chapter all the mystery is there and you could do alot with it as for a poem it would probibly need more stucture for flow but any way great hook.
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19 years ago
by Misstress
*clap*clap* nicely written from the beggining to end.
Very Good one indeed.
Like it a lot...
;-)5/5
