Heyy great poem reeli good rhythm um i might have wanna put it on the poems about life n stuff but its sorta sad not that much but good 5/5

srri i mean u might not i migh

Flawless again you are amazing

wow...you can't believe how much i've felt like that..i just could never explain it the way you did.

really nice poem so unique you have nice topics to write about and the way you express yourself is amazing i love it nice job!

wow.. again, very good poem!!

Favorite Part:

Crumpled, old newspaper lying on the floor
it’s time has past, it has no more purpose