by shadows cloud my ability to love save me Apr 25, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
You once told me of things you couldn't speak of. |
Great poem god why are all the goood poets in diiffrent states? well keep it up. |
by Becky drake
great work, write more I will keep reading, Love ya Becky check out mine. |
by Becky drake
great work, write more I will keep reading, Love ya Becky check out mine. |
by Jay27
this is a really good poem. It's strange because it doesnt really flow, yet it still feels right. It takes me to the crowd, it works. Good luck. |
by Katherine
wow. that is such a good poem. but it was only the very last line that got me a little bit confused. other than that, two thumbs up and a 5/5. good job. |