Thats really sad. its such a good poem. really well expressed!

wow. that is such a good poem. but it was only the very last line that got me a little bit confused. other than that, two thumbs up and a 5/5. good job.

this is a really good poem. It's strange because it doesnt really flow, yet it still feels right. It takes me to the crowd, it works. Good luck.

great work, write more I will keep reading, Love ya Becky check out mine.

great work, write more I will keep reading, Love ya Becky check out mine.

Great poem god why are all the goood poets in diiffrent states? well keep it up.

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