All i need

by Unrequited   Apr 25, 2005


Reaching out
to take your hand
as the thunder crashes
at God’s command
the bloody tears
of a thousand mourners
whisper to me
as i crawl into my corner
watching the sky
as the moon awakes
feeling the pain
of countless mistakes

i cry the tears
of someone who’s dying
rip apart my soul
cause i have stopped trying
i pray for a sign
a reason to live
for so much love
i have yet to give
take me now
unleash my pain
what i am going thru
i can’t explain

everything’s a mess
just take it all away
i cannot stand
to live one more day
yet you are still here
standing at my side
you remove the dagger from my heart
as i see the love in your eyes
now, i will not just try
i will succeed
to make things right
you are all i need

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  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Sad but sweet...well done, as usual....

    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Falling Up

    O my... you have so much emotion in your poem. it was unbelieveable! keep it up and please rate mine:) sammy

  • 19 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    wow, another amazing poems that blew me away. good job and keep writing!

  • 19 years ago

    by Danielle

    wow. that was really good. very well written, and expressed, as Amit has stated already...

    [just so ya know... I changed my name. I was F0R3V3R_8R0K3N. You have me in your profile, so I dunno if you really care or not, but just thought I'd tell ya...]

    Take Care.
    Always, Danielle.

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Excellent write, very well expressed, keep writing and keep smiling
    5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit.

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