How i hurt

by Dani   Apr 25, 2005


A line lays,
upon her wrist,
she felt the blade hit a vein.
she thought this one would hurt,
but she felt no pain.
the world was too hard,
no one even cared.
so why in the first place,
was she so scared?
everyone tried to help,
but they just made it worse,
i only wish they could see,
just how much i hurt.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley Arnold

    i agree. and i found out ppl do care. and different people have different ways of showing it. But dani i no how you feel at times. good peom. talk to you later dan dan the cheerleading man.

    xox Ashmo To The Extreme xox

  • 19 years ago

    by loosing grip

    thats well written. i no it feels like ppl dont understand n most ppl dont no. Some ppl no how ur feeling, and hav seen proof, they jus dont no how 2 help so they choose 2 say nothing, it dusnt mean they dont care, its jus that they r afraid they wil make the situation worse. Thats jus wat a friend told me. but i asure u , ppl care bout u. keep writin dude, well done

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