Life

It was bueatiful, thats life, you explained it, very short and good, i liked it
5/5
xox Bam

very true. when life hands you those lessons they're hard to understand but somehow we all pull through. i really like the message you're sending. :) Keep up the amazing work! Peace, //ari\\

not bad not bad
~Freak~

A few spelling errors, but as you said, spell check doesn't catch everything. I liked the format you used, the greatest thing about poetry, is there is no right or wrong, its feelings and emotions, and attitudes etc......so you keep writing from the heart, and listen to yourself....if you like it, then its good........I think this is a 5/5 keep writing and I will keep reading. Love ya Becky

Nice write, very well done.

5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

Nidhi's Love, Amit.