Harsh Words, Voices, Mistaken Poison

by Just Lucy   Apr 25, 2005


The noises you poisoned me with
the voices that you broke me with
how could i stop myself
temptation got a hold of me

the poison is for your drink
the voices are telling me this
and you will slowly die
and your body will roughly shake

dieing a horrible painful death
and still i laugh at all this torment
but i never wanted to
i told you it's these voices
they are telling me to

evil nasty voices, what will i do next?
i take his flat dead body
through it in the lake
no one will find out I left him bloody

the guilt i can't stand
the voices getting louder
will anything i do
make me more sour?

let this all go
now i speak to myself
just jump off the bridge
join the one you have murdered

so am standing atop the bridge
THIS IS FOR YOU WORLD
now let me be
drowning in this crimson river!

(C) Lucy Green

*now can you please help me out, lol, i wasn't sure i should have put it in here or sadness and depression, so tell me if i should change it or not, i would appreciate it heaps*

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  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Definately keep it here. Ther are a few spelling/grammatical errors you might want to fix though lol.
    Lovely deep poem and definitely 'dark'