My bestfriend, My lover

by *liZ*   Apr 25, 2005


Wonderful Man, bringing me ease, won my heart over on bended knee.

You broke through the barrier, in my heart was a wall, now we just watch it as the peices fall.

My eyes before, always filled with tears, until you came in taking away all my fears.

You listen to me, as I cry out loud, and take away all my stormy clouds.

At my weakest point you still came through, and I'll never regret falling inlove with you.

A kiss can tell a thousand things, and yours told me what love you would bring.

Scared of relationships I was before you, but you helped me see how love can be true.

You wiped the tears from my broken eyes, and took away the hope of wanting to die.

You hold my heart, and will until the end, how thankful I am I married my bestfriend.

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  • 19 years ago

    by erotema

    awww... this one is so sweet. good poem. i think what you lack in meter and rhythm (which are usually a big deal to me), you make up for in emotional control... you have a lot of power in your words. keep writing more like this.

  • 19 years ago

    by Courtney Lynn

    Wow another really good poem!!! keep it up!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by shannon

    another great poem..5/5 amazing..you have a talent. keep it up.

    shannon<33

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    That is so beautiful, a perfect love poem.....Got me to think about my boyfriend!!! Love it!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Frankie

    That was beautiful, it reminds me of how I feel about my husband. 5/5 definetly!