by *liZ* Apr 25, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Wonderful Man, bringing me ease, won my heart over on bended knee. |
by erotema
awww... this one is so sweet. good poem. i think what you lack in meter and rhythm (which are usually a big deal to me), you make up for in emotional control... you have a lot of power in your words. keep writing more like this. |
Wow another really good poem!!! keep it up!!! |
by shannon
another great poem..5/5 amazing..you have a talent. keep it up. |
That is so beautiful, a perfect love poem.....Got me to think about my boyfriend!!! Love it!!! |
by Frankie
That was beautiful, it reminds me of how I feel about my husband. 5/5 definetly! |