Daddy Where Are You?

by [[GLAMOROUS__x]]   Apr 25, 2005


Daddy where are you?
I think I'm lost,
Daddy where are you?
My fingers are crossed,
Daddy I need you,
Here by my side,
Daddy where are you?
You're here in my mind
Daddy I love you,
You can see how much Ive cried,
Daddy where are you?
I cant believe you lied,
Daddy I miss you,
Ive looked for you, Ive tried.

But Daddy you left... Now i feel dead inside....

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow! this was definetely powerful! really great! the repitition really worked and created a really intense poem! it was filled with emotion and sadness, it flowed without a glitch, and was just really excellent! 5/5 p.s. i agree that that poem was very inapropriate, lol, i just wanted to try something new ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*beautiful*~||||d!$a$teR||||

    1 word: WOW.

    thats really really really good. excelent. 5/5.

    i can relate.

    really good. really deep.

    ((pReTtY iN PiNk))

  • 19 years ago

    by [[GLAMOROUS__x]]

    you guys are so kind... this poem made me pour my eyes out crying becoz it brought bk all my memories of my dad goin away... :(

  • 19 years ago

    by [[GLAMOROUS__x]]

    thankyou!!! this is from my heart becoz my daddy left my mom when i woz lil so please rate!! xxx

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