thankyou!!! this is from my heart becoz my daddy left my mom when i woz lil so please rate!! xxx

you guys are so kind... this poem made me pour my eyes out crying becoz it brought bk all my memories of my dad goin away... :(

1 word: WOW.

thats really really really good. excelent. 5/5.

i can relate.

really good. really deep.

((pReTtY iN PiNk))

Wow! this was definetely powerful! really great! the repitition really worked and created a really intense poem! it was filled with emotion and sadness, it flowed without a glitch, and was just really excellent! 5/5 p.s. i agree that that poem was very inapropriate, lol, i just wanted to try something new ;)