i like this...there is never a wrong way to write your feelings down. just as long as their your feelings, it all comes together deep and well when read.

great poem, it's better then you think and poetry is an excellent way to put down your feelings, many of us do. i really love your poetry you are being added to my favorites list, just so you know. great write.

~PLP~ lil slam~ always here

Very well expressed. Nice write, Excellent!!!~
5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit.

Very good poem ,i'm sorry you feel like this, you rock, I hope you become prime minister, I wish i was you, I love you... xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx