by Chelsea Apr 25, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I feel the winds pick up |
I like your poem i think it can reaaly make people cry if their soppy and all that if u want email me at |
by vanna
i like it a lot! keep writing! 5/5 |
by ?
Good poem, I think it would make good song lyrics although maybe the last line could do with abit of work. Keep it up xxx |
by Luke
i loved it. i think its weakest point is the end tho. if you could fix that up itd be super-awesome. 5/5. |