by Robert Apr 25, 2005
category :
Life, society /
about society
Unbreakable I am wave crashing on their own, |
by Vanessa
Long but this was worth the read. I really loved the sstory and the moral it had behind it. You word chose was amazingly descrptive, really brought the life out in this poem. the emtion was deep and strong. The only problems with this that I found are a few grammer, errors, and lack of punction, but if i dwelled on it I would be a hyprocite. Very well written, once again Robert you have done an amazing job. 5/5 |
Nice. |
by xxxStarSxxx
You can never have a bad poem. They are all great in their own way. I love them all! and this one too 5/5 |
by e LIZ a beth
Another great one, goood job!!! your very good at writting! :] |
Really wonderful and beautiful write! |