Comments : My Turn

  • 19 years ago

    by Red Charm

    I've locked up my heart
    I've made a new key
    I've changed the number to my soul
    I've moved to a new state of me
    I love this part of your poem. It sounds really good. Inspiring peice

  • 19 years ago

    by Lindsay C

    very good! i really loved it! keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by Lemma

    Great poem. Like 'Red Charm' I love

    I've locked up my heart
    I've made a new key
    I've changed the number to my soul
    I've moved to a new state of me

    It's so good. Keep writin.

    Emma xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Kia

    i love this poem... kinda what im goin thru right now... im trying to get over this guy and i think i finally have i love this part its my fave

    I've locked up my heart
    I've made a new key
    I've changed the number to my soul
    I've moved to a new state of me

    its awesome i love it great job

  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Another very well written poem my friend. Simply excellent. Every bit flowed quite nicely...I love the part the others posted above. it was very creative. you are amazing. xxx