Falling From You

by Daniel Mulvany   Apr 26, 2005


Remember now,
At the bottom of a bottle,
Where the ground breaks and the earth collapses?
There I am falling from you,
Reaching for a neverpresent grasp,
Where there was always a hand to hold.
May my ghost have life to drag you down with me.
I'll tear at your ankles,
As well as your heart,
Until you fall just as I have.
Then will you listen to reason,
When you're face down in the dirt,
Or when I can no longer gasp for breath,
When all the words I've said are lost to the wind,
And from my back I stare at the stars,
With half the eyes that did stare at those stars?
So this is where I lay,
And in my heart I feel you say,
"I've forgotten what life looks like from down there."
To tell the truth I'd wish not say,
But to honesty betray would be manipulating,
Thus I respond,
As plain as words could say,
"It looks like a life without you."

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Very well written...and nicely expressed...
    I like the last part most...very beautiful..

    "Where the ground breaks and the earth collapses?,
    There I am falling from you,"

    "To tell the truth,
    I'd wish not say,
    But to honesty betray would be manipulating,"

    ^^ beautifully written...

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Very powerfull man , and scary a bit at first ,!!!
    what a strong emotions!!

    mmm, but if i goign to give a little criic , i hope ythis poem have a rhym of some sort , i dont intend to say it is not good , but paragraphing and ryning would make a perfect one
    :)
    anyway this si my opignion!!

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Interesting poem, Great ending

  • 18 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Im not very clear about exactly what the point was here.. but even so.. not one of you best.

  • 19 years ago

    by melissa

    very nice said

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