Next World I live for me

by Dark Savior   Apr 26, 2005


I am tired of living for it all.
while i lay crying in a ball.

I'm sick of all the pain, hurt or hate.
it's like the world is locked in a debate.

it's only showing the dark hurtful side
because now a days personality's collide

you think your better then me cause you got cash
you look down on me and call me no good trash

sick of this world, i should end it now
that is something that god doesn't allow

all i see is this dark black,hand on the rail
flick open my knife and heart did impale

ending it all forgetting it now, blood flows down
as it runs down my white shirt, now an off colored brown

i end it all and fall down to death
left alone by this earth called pest

© 2005 Shaun M.K

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  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem, it was sad and I can relate to it, well, used to relate to it. I liked everything about this poem and I see nothing wrong with it. Another 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    I could help you with the grammar if you wanted...it isn't too bad...and it's true, everyone has their faults. Good work.

    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    that was great....but sad...keep it up =)...take care ~much love~ ~more hugs~

    -brittnay- ((5/5))

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    all i see is this dark black,hand on the rail
    flick open my knife and heart did impale

    Love that couplet! Nice job 5/5

    ---Heather

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    This is a poem that i have wrote a long time ago and i couldn't post it due to my computer being down.

    It is just how i felt at the time. I hope you enjoyed it, i know my grammer sucks...but oh well..i have my faults just like everyone else.

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