R.I.P Me 1983-1983

It seems you were expecting negative feedback, and I don't see why...you're an amazing poet. I've felt much of what you spoke about in this poem...and I applaud your effort of writing out your soul...it is okay to cry....I think that is why the ending feels a bit incomplete...but I love it as is...besides your life isn't complete and you're still learning and living and perhaps searching....

I hope things are going better for you than they were when you wrote this...take care.

xxx

That's really sad Dark. I feel the same sometimes but I've always believed that the ones who suffer the most are the ones closest to Gods heart. Endure them, beat them, and crush them. That's what I do and I assure you-it works! Anyway its a good composition though its written in a rush. Another 5/5.

so sad....but brilliant as well....hey, i understand life gets tough....i was just about over my depression and then my friend told me some stuff, actually a few of my friends....and i went back down....just try to keep your head up, and keep on writing, you are a great writer....i will never be able to write like this...its just amazing....take care ~much love~ ~many hugs~

-brittnay- ((5/5))

With a little hope and love for yourself, anything can change. I pray you the best.Nice job... and it seems like Emma may want a bit of you =) smile!
-Heather

this is as close as i've come to putting my soul out in words. i ended up crying again like the fool that i am. I am just writing down whatever words had came onto the pad.....

i don't care what you have to say..because whatever you say to me can't possibley be worse then my life.