Wow you really brought out the feelings of your friend. It's sad to hear she feels she needs to cut! All the best to you and your friend! Very well written! Take Care! Brooke

This is pretty good although you don't capture the viewpoint of a cutter as strong as one could, i'm sorry about your friend. Be there to support her and encourage her to do more activity with you so she will be distracted, don't tell her not to cut though, honestly it will only hurt her more taking away what helps her so much. If you are there to support her and distract she will quit on her own, not saying it would be soon...but she won't "really" be able to quit untill she wants to...i use to cut so i have an idea on how it really feels plz take what i said to heart i cut for nearly five years and when i did want to stop it took another year to do just that,

much love tabby

awww... 5/5 <x3

I reallt like this poem, you must be a really good friend to be able to see your friends cutting grom her point of view insted of judging her. I really like the way you prgressed the poem too.