I LOVE IT! VELVET ROMANCE IS RIGHT PAINFULLY HONEST, BUT THATS THE ONLY WAY TO BE. I LIKE THAT! GREAT POEM! 5!

I read your poem soully because i've written one called 'Goodbye to Yesterday' and i wanted to see who else had written poems with simular names. (sad-i know, lol) nevertheless, i found your poem to be exactly about what i thought it may be about. i'm not saying this is a bad thing, but rather the opposite. the title of your poem gives a good indication of what your poem may be about. i liked the story and the way it was told. well done

Brad