I am very sorry for your loss..I hope that in time you will not blame yourself and you will find peace. Your poem was really touching.

Good Job Stay Strong!!

Very touching. So sad. Good job. 5/5

~no more

great job it brought tears to my eyes and i hope that you enjoy writting your poems as much as i love reading them keep it up

luv
~nova~

This one gave me goose bumps. Very powerful. I'm sorry for your loss. I know how you feel..

Oh honey, this gave me goose bumps all over- your words are so so powerful i could feel the grief pouring out of them.. so sad yet so engaging. thanks for your comments too, it's nice to have feedback. guess poetry is a great way to angle negative energies [as you say in your biog!!] i'll add you to my msm so hopefully chat soon x

Oh honey, this gave me goose bumps all over- your words are so so powerful i could feel the grief pouring out of them.. so sad yet so engaging. thanks for your comments too, it's nice to have feedback. guess poetry is a great way to angle negative energies [as you say in your biog!!] i'll add you to my msm so hopefully chat soon x

I got tears in my eyes. really really sad! beautiful poem.

:( dang...good poem but the sorrow wont let me type anything happy
peace
Anthony

0h im so sorry for your loss nearly made me cry coz its so hard and difficult when u lose a loved one. a very touching piece hun and i like the start and the ending. very well written. im sure shes looking down on you from time to time =) xx

"I remember that day
It's burned in my mind
Angels took you away
But they left me behind"

Lovely opening stanza sweetie! It really pulled me into the poem! I loved it!
xoxo

That's so sad.
I can't even imagine going through that.
-Animus

Awww this is sweet i know how you feel. i felt like that when my cousin passed away 5 years ago. 5/5

...... xoxoxo.....
so sad yet expressed with a true passion....