Tear

by Jacklyn   Apr 26, 2005


Gather collide,
Try to hold back tight,
Clouding vision and mind,

Discovering the want to hide,
But yet be hugged tight,
As your checks bloom bright,

Deep breath and sigh,
Quivering lip and chin,
Sadness or anger fill within,

An overflow of cruel life,
Or over whelmed with happy delight,
An overflow within you eye,
As one tear takes a slide.

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  • 19 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    Awww, this poem kinda reminds me of myself...this is so good, I'm addin u 2 my favorites...Peace

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    Great poem, well done and keep it up, short yet really powerful, you write really great material, keep going

  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    It reminded me of a Goo Goo Dolls song, 'slide'. Because of the last line. Well done again.

    :D Luff yew,'
    llKalah.

  • 19 years ago

    by Roni

    Hey, you finished it. Good job. it isnt your best... no offense. but still good. 5

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

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    Your imagery was amazing! GREAT JOB hunz 5/5

    Love Heather

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