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Your imagery was amazing! GREAT JOB hunz 5/5

Love Heather

Hey, you finished it. Good job. it isnt your best... no offense. but still good. 5

It reminded me of a Goo Goo Dolls song, 'slide'. Because of the last line. Well done again.

:D Luff yew,'
llKalah.

Great poem, well done and keep it up, short yet really powerful, you write really great material, keep going

Awww, this poem kinda reminds me of myself...this is so good, I'm addin u 2 my favorites...Peace