wow, i'd be a wreck if sum1 lied to me like that.. im sorry.

The nicest people do the most horrible things. I remember when my dad tried to drown me, what fun!

Good Day,
Moke

So i like the poem. but the story around that is kinda ironic. See,... I just found out like two weeks ago that someone in my family who said they were terminal .... acually wasnt. It pissed me off. The only thing thats really different ...heh... is i know im mad at her for it. And shes never been around to care for me, shes just that person that you see and feel bad for,
heh.

Good luck with that.
Great write, loved how the words flowed.
-courtney

Fantastic poem!! I'm adding you to my favourites if thats ok xxxx

Is this about who I think it is?

I really admire how you wrote about the betrayl and foolishness produced from the lie. I also admired how you were able to elaborate off of the lie itself and what a huge impact it had caused in the first place.

I absoulty loved these lines,
"Well summer came and went away
And autumn's hit the wall"
the way you described time passing was unique and orginial.

Well done, lovely.