Great poem!!! very good... I voted a 5! please check out my poem "My dream boy dosen't exist" please comment/vote.. hugs

Nice! that was really deep. check out some of my poems theres you're always here...its one of my favs. thanx xox chels

Wow that was really good! Keep writing! 5/5!

Hey! Yu rock....I like yur style, and I like a writer that can express his/herself so well and freely. I'm sure that compared to yu I won't be as good, but check out some of my poems if yu have the chance. My username's Kiah....and if yu do, thanx.

nice write. I really liked it. <3333

5/5.

My favourite part is:

"How do you explain a bad day
When every day is bad"

Good Job.

-P.A.

5/5.

My favourite part is:

"How do you explain a bad day
When every day is bad"

Good Job.

-P.A.

I know I haven't commented on anything of yours in awhile, but I really think you've outdone yourself on this one. This is an EXCELLENT piece of work. very, very well written. If you're interested in reading any of my work, I'd suggest What He Took From Me. I loved this poem! Very good