excellent poem, one of the best like this that i've read... 5/5 definitely!

wow that was wicked!you can really see that picture in your mind...i mean i can lol.but sweet poem anyway.

I loved it! Thanx for commentin on mine. I like whenever i get comments. lol. Well 5/5 4 u 2 / holla back

Awesome poem man... I know what you mean it's so hard...keep on writing man

Awesome poem man... I know what you mean it's so hard...keep on writing man

i wish you didnt cut. but you be who you want. i hope that you are aite? thank you very much for you comment. i am most def going to check out more of your stuff. this poem was very powerful. keep u this awsome work. Much Luv

Nick

Great poem!

Wow great poem. I like the darkness in it. Thanks for the comment on my poem. Keep it up.~Red

*The blood now runs like tears* I love that line and the way the poem is so detailed at full of description. Great Job!
Kate x~x~x

Hey girli,
Your very good. and your words really do cut skin deep. Keep on writing b.c your a great writer. Thanks for commenting on mine. lylas email sometime at NoWhErE2RuN11@aol.com lylas byez.

wow that is awsome you are a great writer keep it up

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great poem!!

eYz..omG FanTAstiC Work!! LUVd it Yay! :) keeP it Up LuV StEphy :)XXx

You asked me to read this poem. All I have to say is WOW!!! You did a great job on this poem. I know how you feel about cutting. As you could tell by Some Cut I also do that. So I really relate to it. Thanks for be one that understands.

Hi I thought i saw some of your poems posted on the first page and i was wondering if you wrote "Dead Or Dying" cause i knew that your name was on it! and please comment me back and tell me if you are and if your not too busy please comment my poems i need to hear other peoples input! thanks again!
*Lost Soul*

Great job...
i can totally relate to this...
'the blood now runs like tears is a great line!
xxxx
abby

This was great, but still sad. keep up the good work.