The world is on your shoulders
What r u going to do.
r u going to sit around and let it conquer u?
U have to keep on going
u have to do WATS right
and when u feel your on your own
u look toward your God's light
no matter what may happen
or What may come to be
U have to keep on going
in peace and harmony
i know this may sound foolish
but try to understand
u were put on to this earth
to care for this great land
This is beautiful poem Felicia, btw your
name is my niece’s name also. Who
just last week gave birth to a baby
girl. Saying that the last line in your
poem, I think should give tribute to
life. “for all to care hand in handâ€
or “to care and share take my handâ€
But then again, if it is war, you are
talking about, leave it as it is. I feel
the read can be a prayer before battle.
Then again it is your poem, and is
fine like it is. It is what you are saying
and left to the reader to interpret it. ( :
A beautiful read indeed, Write On.