This is beautiful poem Felicia, btw your
name is my niece’s name also. Who
just last week gave birth to a baby
girl. Saying that the last line in your
poem, I think should give tribute to
life. “for all to care hand in hand”
or “to care and share take my hand”

But then again, if it is war, you are
talking about, leave it as it is. I feel
the read can be a prayer before battle.

Then again it is your poem, and is
fine like it is. It is what you are saying
and left to the reader to interpret it. ( :
A beautiful read indeed, Write On.