ha- i love it. there are some really good writers on this site. Totally keep it up. 5/5. mind checking out some of my work? :)

Wow this is deep, but i can relate with more than one of the versus. Keep writing.

~girlii797

Nice poem. The first bit was good but the ending wasn't very strong.

hey nick all i have to say is no matter what hard times happen u can count on ur buddys... even me @---'-- lol.....but all i have to say is this poem is great it just made sense...u just keep inproveing keep it up hun.... cuz everyone on this site luvs u and ur work

~Alyson~

Wow Nick! This is kind of scary. I hope that you're alright. Just keep writing.
With lots of love and a hug,
Krista J.