Sounds like it would be a great song! I could definalty feel it in there! Keep up the great work!
Take care.....
Haily
XOXOXOXOXO

I would love to hear someone sing it! I think it would be a great song! Another great job! Brooke

this is beautiful, nice job

Unloved ♥

nice i love it
it's not like the other songs on here
it's not repetitive

i thought this one was good, but not the best. thank you so much for your criticism on my poem 'Unidentified Heart'. thanks for the site and your comment!

Your writing is captivating. I love it! I am going to add you to my favourites because i feel you truly deserve to be there. Another excellent write and a brilliant song.

-ellie

I liked it very much....i'll read more of yer work later!