Very creative and original! 5/5

Love,
Heather

Wow! Amazing, very well done Robert. Excellent write.

5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

Nidhi's Amit.

Wonderful, excellent, perfect and beautiful.....I think these words are right for your poem, great job, very well written and it had a nice flow!!!

Interesting and different! You did a good job! Have you every thought of breaking your poems down instead of a paragragh I think they would be easier to read! Just a thought! Enjoyed this poem! Take Care! Brooke~

not bad not bad. I enjoyed reading this one. it was an interesting topic I think, and I can relate to the girl too.
~Freak~

very differen. i enjoyed reading it.

Jacs
xxx

the honest feelings in this poem are heartfelt

a masterpeice you truly rock :D

i love the message..."Love me for me and i'll love you for eternity!" 5/5