omg this is really good!!! i thought i was gonna cry cuz it is sad. keep up the good work gurl. Always believe in love and trust in God!
-Britt

awwww thats so cute
your veryyy good at that!!
<3 erica <3

awesome poem! keep it up! excelently written... that would be horrible if something like that actually happened
~*Mandy*~

Hey! your poem wasn't that long, never seen one like this before and i really enjoyed reading it!
kt xx

WOW, another GREAT poem!!! I love this one!!!

Came bak for another read,LOL,I ran out of time yestaday.And for schizzle,I'm amazed.U got it all here.Hehe,Course I write like a rappa,I'm the RapMasta,(Jay Z comes to mind),lol,H to the Izzo girl,Respect.

Wow, got to say that is one amazing poem. like a glimse into someones life, you can just feel whats going on... its really well writing have never seen a poem like this. i love it.

5/5

keep up the good work,

love n kisses
katie

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Very well done, an intimate and powerful look at emotion.

wow, it's awesome. I've never seen something like this. Excellent work. I loved it. 5/5

~no more

wow great job i loved it

~nova~

:O:O:O jaw droppin poem.. the hook 2 the end of a lovers storie iz always good but u made it perfect. i wish i still had strong feelings for someone as u did and be able 2 share my feelings with anyone who wants 2 lissen. well im out i gotsa eat
peace gemma
urs truelly
anthony

Wow- heart breaking yet wonderful at the same time. you have such a talent in getting these emotions across. love the diary entry style- original idea. xx

I loved this poem!! it was great! 5/5, so strongly worded and sad!!! I cant pick a fav stanza cos they are all fabulous!! Well done!

Thanks for your comments they mean more than you know. Im just reading a few more of your poems and this one is wow!! So good and ended brilliantly. So sad, but amazing! 5/5

Kelly
xx

I loved this poem the 1st time i read it in your poem book,

its really really sweet and cute!

wuvz ya
x x x x x x

Aww hun this is a fantastic piece, def got my 5 vote keep writin an al kp reading take care sarah x

Omg hun. well firstly let me say that -i dnt no if ive told u- but i love reading poems that have a story in em.. anyway this was realyl sad!!! omg it nearly bought tears to my eyes. it was so deep.. it was really good but! the whol structure everything -the words, the story.. it was really good. =) xx

This poem is pure beauty! I loved it so much! You are the best poet on this site! I loved it!
xoxo

That's another poem of your's that gave me chills.
That's awful.
Well done.
-Animus

Ok ok ok i know how you feel on this one cause in my diary i always write about the boy i like and the one i WENT with but i dont know how it feel for the one youre gettind married to die because i never been close to gettin married but other than that its good. you are an excellent writer