~~Drowning~~

by Ashlynn   Apr 27, 2005


This lone world is brought me down..
I feel like i am going to drown...
Swimming in a pool of undrained blood...
Diving..
Swimming away...

I am trying not to stay..
Failing to notice me, I try not to stray...
I waving my arms high in the sky...
But you don't try..

I hate you now...
My ghost hunts you...
moaning crying about you...

Covered in black..
From head to toe..
To never to show my face again...
Try not to be known..

Walking though out your thoughts..
I come in but you push me out..

In this lone world
Brings me
DOWN!

To the ground...
To the black pave earth, I cry..
In the lone world...
I cry...

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  • 19 years ago

    by Polly

    this is good, i hope you dont mind me saying but you could try to improve a bit by just reading it through a bit to make it flow. keep it up and take care
    Polly ~X~