that was an awsomne poem im sorry for your loss

this is good, it does rhyme in places and i can see the emotiion and sadness know what i mean. its cool keep it up
Polly ~X~

wow thats really good.. Im sorry for the loss of your frien. Keep your head up!.. :o)...

xoxo,
Heather**

Wow this poem is amazing. I hope you are alright...Stay strong through everything.

sry bout ur friend.that is a good poem tho.they don't always hafta rhyme to be good.

hey, that was a great poem. im sorry to hear about your friend, i hope ya alrite...

i like it cause the same thing happened to me and so i love it i feel u
love ya much,
amber

Very sad and full of deep emotion.. I'm sorry for your loss I know it's hard.. Keep your head up and keep strong..xx:

*> : PainOfOne

wow, this poem is good and touching, its rllyl nice but very sad. plz check out my poems too:). well done. love ya *Anna* xxxxxxxxx