This is good David.It brought forth tears to my eyes....you always no how to make a poem someone can cry over.lol.Seriously it's a good poem.I enjoyed it and now I'm going to steal pieces of it to use.j/k

beautiful!!!! very moving poem. amazing work!!!
-xXx-

OMG! no poem has ever made me cry like this. i love your poems and ur goin on2 muh fav list. 5/5 keep ur head up sweetie

Hey, I really enjoyed reading this poem. It's so full of emotion. It truly is sad, but extremly well written! *amazing*-C'ya xoxo

yep im not crying but it was good enough to make me cry :)it was so full of emotion and had a story behind it....i voted 5 on it well done....wow man that was good :) x)

awesome job such a sad subject i hate breakups but beautifully written great job

WOWWW...that was excellent. one of the best I have ever read. very emotional..I had tears...the title is very creative. you always come up with these fantastic ideas. I cant even explain how much i loved this.