that was good

WOW that was really good.... i boyfriend of three years was liked last year on the same day by a drunk driver the only difference was i was in the car with him.

Breathtaking, heart wrenching, powerful and although the poem is tragic you ended particularly strongly. Well done xx

Oh so sad...
Be strong...
You really did well on this poem.
LIke it alot.5/5

Good Poem!
*5/5*

~>>**WOW!!! dat poem really made me cry...its sad buh yet just so perfect!!...if that incident happen to you my sympothy goes out to u and his loved ones...im so sry and time well let it heal buh it will be a long process...Love IS AN AMAZING AND AT SOME TIMES A HORRIBLE THING...stay strong and keep writing...YOU have an amazing talent...5/5!!!...Good luck!!!**<<~

That was a very heart felt and warm poem. It ws very good the way the emotions were hanging on every word and the love felt in it was grand to say the least. The only thing I saw wrong in it was it was abit too wordy in places and kinda knocked off the flow but I gave it a 5 just beacuse it carried so much emotion through it all. I don't give 5 that often so be proud take care and hope to see you in my comment box hacking up my work lol...

is this true????
that is so sad you got me teary eyed

This is so sad and so beautiful at the same time, it almost made me cry!!! Hope this isn't a true story, but if it is I hope that you are ok??? I can't imagine how that must be, to lose some one you love that way!!! Great poem, so heartbreaking....

*Hugs Sabrina*

Wonderful poem. I loved it. I'll read some more of your poems...
Love Line

If that really happened, i'm sorry. That was a beautiful poem and i hope you never stop. Always right about him. That way he'll never leave you.

wow completly speechless! brillient!!!!!!!!1 x)

I'm sorry for your loss. It's the hardest thing to have to burry someone you love. That was a beautiful poem, I loved it. 5/5 stars.

Very sad but very good. Sometimes you need a way to express the sad things. Very nice job.

wow that poem is so emotional and heartfelt awesome job... so sad

omg... that poem was so sad..... i liked the part about valentines day.. very sad... i loved the words you used. it was a beautiful poem. keep it up!

Superb Write, Shannon. Very Well done.

5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

Nidhi's Love, Amit.

This poem is really sad too, I'm so sorry I hope everything turns out for you, ~Jess~

Thats sooooo good. God I know how it is to lose someone you love very close to you. I lost my three cousins of a drunk driver, then my uncle (he was my favorie) died of aids, then a couple of years ago my grandfather died of a heart attack, and now my other uncle (he's my other favorite) may die, and then my aunt may die of cancer. So yeah I know how thoes things are. They really do hurt very much.

It is very good.