i like it! its always good and brave to try something new than what your used to writing. that way you can experiement with which ones the best to express yourself. it makes it more meaningful...very good poem!

Katherine! this was soo good! im glad your trying a new style.. it was really good!! no.. i lied.. it was AMAZING!! :o)! keep upthe great work your so talented!!! I LOVE YOU x A BAJILLION!!!! :o)

Katie...I think your poem was awesome! And I love how you wanted to try something new, you are an great poet and you should tell yourself more than you do!! Love all your poems!!! xoxoxoxox.....Ash