I wish

by Amanda   Apr 27, 2005


I wish that you loved me,
I wish that you cared,
I only wish I never,
ever got so scared,

I wish for lots of hugs,
every single time i cry,
I wish for lots of hope,
and i don't know why,

I wish that i was someone else,
I wish that i wasn't me,
I wish that i could hide away,
so that me - you couldn't see,

I wish I wasn't so depressed,
I wish I wasn't so very sad,
I wish I was a different me,
who wouldn't get so mad.

Copyright 2005 - Amanda Linzi

Another one from January 04. As you can see my poems have got better as i have got older. LOL! Please comment though! Thanks :)

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  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    I liked this one alot if you get time check out Hold Me I think you will like it ...

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Good job! I think as we get older we all start to write better.Well I don't know about me! I wish for a lot of things too! The thing is my wishes never come true! But that's life! Great poem! Take Care! Brooke

  • 19 years ago

    by Courtney Lynn

    I agree your poems are getting better... Although idk how... Its hard to beat Great!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by chloe

    great peom 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Another great poem...I'm glad that your poems today are more positive and that you are not that sad anymore, they really helps me alot!!! thank you so much for sharing!!!

    *Love Sabrina*

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