Great poem but filled with so much sadness. I'm sending you a great big hug, and I truly care. hugs, love, *Ann*

This is a sortof sad poem.But it is a great one.
5/5
:)Tes

Another great poem...I'm glad that your poems today are more positive and that you are not that sad anymore, they really helps me alot!!! thank you so much for sharing!!!

*Love Sabrina*

great peom 5/5

I agree your poems are getting better... Although idk how... Its hard to beat Great!!!

Good job! I think as we get older we all start to write better.Well I don't know about me! I wish for a lot of things too! The thing is my wishes never come true! But that's life! Great poem! Take Care! Brooke

I liked this one alot if you get time check out Hold Me I think you will like it ...