An excellent piece showing thought and reflection. Well done xx

I wonder myself! Good job on this poem it's so true! Take Care! Brooke

wow, that was brilliant! you are an awesome writer, and i don't see how this poem could get anything lower than a 5! the only problem i have, though, is with this stanza: "Sometimes I wonder,
Why people would cheat others,
Why must they lie?
They stand higher than their brothers."
the laast part seems kinda forced. but still awesome!
p.s- please check out my newest poem, Unidentified Heart

****WOW..DAT WAS GREAT...WONDERING NEVER HURT NO ONE AND AS LONG AS YOUR WONDERING LEADS TO GOOD DEN THERES NO HARM INTENDED...DEFINITE 5!!!...KEEP IT UP!!!...-WISHINGONASTAR-...****

I wonder that samething at times...well all the time. maybe if people wonder more like you, this world would be a better place for us all. nice job on you poem

thank you everyone!