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by Red Charm Apr 27, 2005 category : Sadness, depression / about depression
You touch me I still break Stay away please You're too much to take You look at me The wrong way My world shatters I don't care what you say You tease me But have a care My feelings aren't easy For me to bear I've tried More than you know I've cried More than I showSorry this is a bad one. Really not my best. Comments are welcome though. I've been in a weird mood today and this is what came out.
by ?
This one isn't bad at all! It had a good flow to it and I could feel your emotions in it, well written, keep it up xxx
by Amit
Well done, this is not a bad one, it's very well expressed. 5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Nidhi's Love - Amit.
