My smile

by IWroteYouAPoemOnMyWrist   Apr 27, 2005


My smile so untruthful
but people believe
that i am happy
cause the smiles all they see

people don't no
I'm nothing but fake
and i hate everything
about my life that a mistake

I'm the one who made myself
hate this life
even knowing I'm brought down
by people who don't no i use a knife

but the smile
it hide everything i don't want to show
it helps me when i need it
and don't want anyone to no

the smile is easy
all i have to do is do it
no one can see that all i think about
is the suicide i want to commit

but thats okay
they'll find out sooner or later
when my life's taken
and they'll no they didn't make it any better

but still my smile
will always show
my fake happiness
my sadness no one will no

yeah this isn't great ... I'm making a better one lol!!! but please vote and comment!

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  • 19 years ago

    by *blHue*mISt*

    cool poem. if you can, try to make them rhym,then it would be great!

  • 19 years ago

    by L0KA

    Hey, I liked your poem. That just about explains me, so I can relate to this. I would advice you to check your spelling. But overall I think it's good. Keep up the great job and keep your head up and don't give up. E-mail me if you ever want to talk. I gave it a 5!

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